My new book. Marathon : The Chilron

Subject: My new book. Marathon : The Chilron Thu May 03, 2007 5:20 am

Well this sux, this sux hairy yellow monkey bawls.
I cant publish my book because of the following reasions:

my book violates 5 major copyright and publishing laws, set by Bungie.

BUT: i can still post it here for aristic purpouses.

Here are the first 4 chapters, enjoy Smile

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Introduction

Welcome to the Chilron, a scientific ship built in 2479.
The crew of the Chilron is devoted to researching life, and creating new life.
The main project on the Chilron is extending Human life, up to 200 years, while maintaining a young figure. The project utilizes a virus to mutate the body, so only one person has to be infected. The infected person will pass it off to other people, and so on.
Now we join two marines taking a break, in the break room.

Chatpter-1
Welcome to the Chilron.

"Hey Marcus" said Private Hicks. "Hello, Hicks" said Marcus.
"So how you feelin?" asked Hicks. "I feel a bit whoosy" said Marcus.
Private Hicks immediatly raised his magnum to Marcus.
"Woah sir! Im not infected, I promise!" exclaimed Marcus.
"Good, hey wheres that new cyborg soldier I ordered? Is he even here yet?" asked Hicks.
"I dont know, Hicks, ask the bridge captain" "WHAM!" "Ow! Hicks, did you just kick me?" asked Marcus. "What? I didnt kick you Marcus, you must of had a little too much coffie".
Hicks went to take Marcus's coffie but he dropped it on the floor "GAAAH! WHAAAA!" screamed Marcus. "What the hell is wrong with you soldier!?" yelled Hicks. "Something is biting my leg!!!"
Screamed Marcus again. Marcus quickly looked under the table, but just as quickly screamed himself to death, literaly. "What the? Marcus? MARCUS!? What in the world is going on here?"
A large spider was seen skittering across the floor, and into the ventallation shaft.
A few explosions occured outside the door, the security alarm then sounded. The intercom screeched on-"Securtity breach, you had better get down there Hicks!" said Leela.
Hicks scrambled to his feet and rushed into the hallway. "Hicks, glad you could make it" said Martinez. There was a set of barracades in bulkeads 8. 5, and 10. "What are those things?" asked Hicks. "They are some sort of parasite, they have taken over half the ship's crew" Said Martinez.
There were huge parasites, they had claws, teeth, and tentacles. The smaller parasites had large teeth, and alot of legs. "What the hell are you talking about?" said Hicks. The ship started to vibrate as explosions went through the lower section of the ship. One by one, each marine was either clobbered, disemboweled, or turned into a parasite.
"Hey! You with the RPG, go fire upon that group of parasites!" said Hicks. "KA-BOOM". The RPG commander blew up 20 out of 200 parasites that were attacking them.

Chapter-2
Oh the humanity!

Private Hicks was just finished unloading 5 magnum rounds into an oncoming parasite.
"Run! Thay keep on coming!" One of the marines screamed.
All of a sudden the marine's skull was crushed under 1000 pounds of parasites.
"Holy crap!" Hicks yelled! The parasites were infesting the ventalation shafts, too!
The crushed marine got up and came after Hicks with a blank look on his face.
"Dammit! What the hell is wrong with you!?" The marine tried to bite Private Hicks.
Hicks opened fire on the infected marine, "These things just dont stop!"
"sir!" one of the marines shouted, "they broke through bulkheads 8 and 5!".
"Roudrigaz, Damage report." Hicks ordered. "yes sir!, about 20 out of 70 men are left".
"If they keep coming like this, we'll all die!" Another marine screamed.
Then, out of nowhere, a small parasite latched onto Roudrigaz's throat.
"AAH! AAAAAAAH!" The parasite climbed deep inside of him, Roudregaz puked up blood and guts as the parasite turned him into a hollow shell. The RPG commander shot one of the bigger parasites and smaller ones came bursting out. "Durandal! close the door already!" Yelled Hicks. "Hehehe, its more fun to see you all die and suffer..." Durandal chuckled over the intercom.
"Son of a--, Fall back, clear sectors 10 and 13 so we can get to the escape pods!.
"Yes sir!" All of the marines quickly retreated as parasites gathered around the barricades.
All was quiet until they got to sector 10. "What!? What do you mean we cant go through?"
The intercom screeched on-"It seems Durandal has made an effort to get all of us killed, by locking sector 10 down"- Leela spoke calmly over the intercom. All of a sudden, a cyborg smashed a marines head against the wall. "oops" said the cyborg. "Hey! What the hell are you doing!?" Hicks yelled.
The cyborg turned to Private Hicks, His face turned pale. "uuh, um, im sorry. hehehe, ill just go over here...". It was the new reinforcement they had called in for, the Mjiloinr multipurpuse cyborg. "I thought he was a parasite" said the cyborg.

Chapter-3
Insanely yours, Durandal.

The RPG commander shot through the locked doors of sector 10, as the small group of soldiers moved onto sector 13.
"Finally! We're here!", Hicks said, "Pile into those escape pods, move it!". After every last soldier was seated in a pod, Hicks and the cyborg was the only one left, and there was one empty pod waiting for him and the cyborg. Hicks climbed in first, but when the cyborg tried to get in, the doors closed.
"What the hell?" screamed Hicks. NuroGas was starting to come through the vents in the pod.
After three muinites, Hicks was dead on the floor. "Whoosh!", His escape pod flew off into deep space. "Wow, Durandal, did you really have to be THAT brutal?", the cyborg said. The introcom screeched on-"I always love a good show, you know". Durandal said. "Durandal you sick bastard" the cyborg remarked -"Hahahaha, I know"- Durandal laughed.
"I need you to go to the information library and secure the Chilron history logs for me". "whatever you say, chief".
Durandal was an AI, then he turned Rampant, and rebelled against 400 years of taking orders and slavery.
Durandal's mission was to destroy the ship he was on, and migrate to his newfound home, Boomer.
Boomer was an abandoned alien ship Durandal had discovered at the age of 387. He then turned 400 and decided it was time to fight back against the Chilron. The Chilron was a ship of the U.N.P.S. (or, United Nations Planetary Security).
"Have you any other plans than to use me as a tool, Durandal?", The cyborg asked.
"No, you will last for 170 years. Thats how long I intend to use you", Durandal said.
The cyborg moved swiftly, as if acting like a swimming swan. "Ah, im here, Durandal".
The intercon screeched on, louder than ever now-"Good, good. Find the reference file titled History--" "KA-BOOM!" the left wall exploded, and about one-hundred parasites poured out of it.
The cyborg took action, he jumped up into the air and crushed two parasites with his one ton metal body.
"You're going to have to do better than that", Durandal said calmly.
The cyborg pulled out two sawed-off shotguns and started blasting away parasites, two by two.
But he was just getting started...

Chapter-4
The Flood.

"Security systems, online" Said Durandal as 20 MADDs poured out of the security hatches
"What took you so long!?" yelled the cyborg. "I was just reading some logs, thats all." Durandal chuckled. The MADDs blasted away parasite after parasite, as blood and gore shot up into the air.
"These drones do a heck of a job, Durandal". "Im always getting better at this, you know", said Druandal. After all the parasites had been killed, the cyborg started reading a log.
"Whats this?" the cyborg muttered. "It appears to be a science log, maybe we can get some info on where these damned parasites came from", Durandal said.
The log read:
Science sector 2, log 28.
The cultures have grown highly unstable, the virus seems to have left the
containment chamber somehow. Ramzy has become infected with it, his skin is peeling off to show his muscles. He is growing what seems to be claws, and new appendages on his chest. Ramzy has grown tentacles as well, and has come after many of the doctors in fury.
This is not supposed to happen, the virus is supposed to extend life!
Not create something that destroys it...

Science sector 2, log 29.
Ramzy is now going after anything that moves, and has started producing aome sort of green fog in his sealed chanmber. His head has fallen off, and he is now showing signs of bone failure.
Now I seem to be getting it too, all of my hair has fallen out, and my lungs have started burning.

Science sector 2, log 30.
Today there have been reports af breakouts all over the ship. today, is truly doomsday for the Chilron. I can no longer hold it in, I crave blood, and I want to kill everyone around me.
My skin has started peeling as well, and I have grown appendages on my chest that seem to pick up any movement around me. This is amasing, but I fear my cravings can no longer be held in.
Today I killed one of the cats aboard the ship, I seem to have injected something into it as I was gutting it. I couldnt belive what I was doing, but I didnt care for some reason. It actually mad me happy to kill the cat.

Science sector 2, log 31.
The cat is still alive somehow, but starting to mutate, it has grown appendages the same as mine.
I went after my science officer today, I dont know why, I just did it. Out of all other people, I was expected to keep my cool even when infected, too bad that wasnt true. I have been put in a sealed chamber with Ramzy, he doesnt seem to mind me at all.I talk to him, but he is more interested in standing there and grunting all day, and probably thinks im one of him. Well, I am, but not entirly yet.

Science lsector 2, log 32.
My eyes have fallen from my head, I can see with these appendages somehow. my instinct has taken over and I go after anyone who is not infected. I am very scared, I try to talk but my lungs have rotted into dust.
My typing skills have deteriorated, and my head is starting to fall off, I fear this is the end for me. More patients are coming into the infirmary every day, all of them have been infected.
Children, infants, mothers, fathers, everyone is mutating like me and Ramzy.
The infants seem to be growing extra pairs of legs and huge sharp teeth, they look like large spiders.
Because the virus speads to quickly, I call it, The Flood.
End Log

"Wow thats really bad" said the cyborg. "Everyone on the ship must be infected", said Durandal.
"If that is so, then we have 75,000 parasites to deal with". "Crap, I always knew I'd die under the command of an insane AI". Remarked the cyborg. "Get the logs, and lets get moving to the bridge", said Durandal. As the cyborg moved to the bridge (about 3 miles away) he spotted a bunch of marines lying on the ground. Then, suddenly, a starnge figure ran at the cyborg.
"BLAM". the cyborg punched right through its head. "What the hell was that? was it a parasite?"
Asked the cyborg. "it was an alien" Answered Durandal. "What!? No one told me about aliens!" Yelled the cyborg, confused. "This species is called the Pfhor, The Pfhor are my sworn enemy. Why are they here?", Said Durandal, also confused.
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i would read that so much . 2 thumbs up

Subject: Re: My new book. Marathon : The Chilron Sat May 05, 2007 4:23 am

thanks
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Subject: Re: My new book. Marathon : The Chilron Sat May 05, 2007 5:30 am

Gj, finish it, we will read it.
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Subject: Re: My new book. Marathon : The Chilron Sat May 05, 2007 2:57 pm

ya, i'll read it.
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Subject: Re: My new book. Marathon : The Chilron Sat May 05, 2007 6:43 pm

Thanks for the support.
It will be done in a couple months or so.
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Subject: Re: My new book. Marathon : The Chilron Sat May 05, 2007 9:38 pm

Neat, but instead of "Wham" or "BOOM" have actual text that gives more detail. Just a quick tip that'll make it look much nicer. Also, I r c not so good gramarz. Other than that the story is cool.
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